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Diver

Although I’m breathing oxygen, Barely a third is sinking in. I dive into the deep dark blue Opening my lungs to you. I’m lost in blackness losing health And push deeper into myself. I drown in thoughts and memories Of what I had outside the sea. Out upon the gentle sand, I had your love; I had your hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/1/2008 9:17:00 PM
Excellent cadence and rhyming... your last four lines are especially effective. Welcome to the Soup my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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