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Disturbing Fly

In fact, I should have washed by water my face To shine and be clean at least once a week, so That fly doesn't land on my big nose any more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/27/2025 8:00:00 PM
I like the humor and honesty here—sometimes the little things, like a pesky fly, make you realize you need to take better care of yourself. Simple and relatable!
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Date: 7/27/2025 4:47:00 PM
ah, summertime and flies....EEEWW!
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Date: 7/27/2025 10:40:00 AM
- Flies ... are disgusting ... you never know where they'll eat their lunch, A.A. :) - hugs
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