Disturbing Fly

In fact, I should have washed by water my face
To shine and be clean at least once a week, so 
That fly doesn't land on my big nose any more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Velasco Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 8:00 PM
I like the humor and honesty here—sometimes the little things, like a pesky fly, make you realize you need to take better care of yourself. Simple and relatable!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:47 PM
ah, summertime and flies....EEEWW!
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 10:40 AM
- Flies ... are disgusting ... you never know where they'll eat their lunch, A.A. :) - hugs
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