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Disturbed Child

That disturbed child The teen girl with no friends, and is rejected by her loved ones She feels broken inside, like theres no other choice She takes the iron razor, she puts it to her arm and hopes the pain will fade, but in the end it only makes her feel worse She does this to herself not because she is sad, but because she doesn't think any one cares She thinks What if I put this razor to my throat, and ended my life Would they care then? She feels like no one cares What she doesn't realize is, if she died a river of tears would come, even faster then the blood would run from her If she only knew life can be brighter If she would only see, that she is loved That disturbed child, We miss her and theres no getting her back What could we have done Was there any changing her mind Only God knows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/10/2013 9:44:00 PM
what a folly....a lot of souls feel that way. i hope more can be said , and more can verbalize their love for one another....nice poem.
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Date: 12/13/2012 7:09:00 PM
For fate has no structure on how things turn out, but this I know god does only know, very sad poem, made mi tear... Great write of emotion<3 Carma
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/13/2012 7:11:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Trevor

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