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Distant love

The sunset knows the tears I hide
It paints the pain I hold inside

Clouds wander through the evening sky
Wondering where have you gone and why

To Breeze I speak in hushed replies
Beyond the seas and foreign trees

they live alone to earn some bread
And whisper dreams to the Moon instead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/4/2025 1:11:00 AM
This is heartfelt and beautiful
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Date: 8/3/2025 5:53:00 AM
This is excellent. I can feel.it and it flows so well :)
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Date: 8/2/2025 2:19:00 PM
Beautiful write, !
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Date: 6/12/2025 1:36:00 PM
Awesome rhymes. Maybe just consider eliminating the question marks
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Date: 6/13/2025 1:08:00 PM
Thumbs up!

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