Distant love

The sunset knows the tears I hide
It paints the pain I hold inside

Clouds wander through the evening sky
Wondering where have you gone and why

To Breeze I speak in hushed replies
Beyond the seas and foreign trees

they live alone to earn some bread
And whisper dreams to the Moon instead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Buhagiar Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 3:15 AM
Smooth but deep. Loved it.
Peranteau Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 12:19 PM
so, to further your think, SVO...arrange your words (syntax) ...use wordz that naturally cauze pausez...or made up werdz (az myself do) to cauze thuh reader to pause (with thought)also with curiosity to read on...*smiles...lol...gotta have fun writing dear poet(ask Google why "POETS don't use punctuations)....much love
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 1:11 AM
This is heartfelt and beautiful
Sands Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 5:53 AM
This is excellent. I can feel.it and it flows so well :)
Hind Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 2:19 PM
Beautiful write, !
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