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Distant Gleams

Distant gleams twinkle

   Beckon sailors, landlubbers 

      Thousand points of light

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Susan Ashley

October 8, 2018 at 1:48 PM

Your lovely imagery brings to mind the brilliant sparkles above the sea, especially with the impact of your last line - which, also brings to mind a G.H.W.B. moment back in time, which unfortunately also seems like a distant gleam.. An awesome multi-dimensional haiku, Gershon. Warmest wishes my dear friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley

October 8, 2018 at 4:21 PM

Hmmm, dear Gershon, over the past couple days I’ve commented on two of your recent poems ‘A Future Here And Now’ and ‘Dawn Takes Wing’ and both are 12 and 10 lines respectively.. so I can and I do comment on your longer poems.. Lol!

Gershon Wolf

October 8, 2018 at 2:12 PM

Gosh, you wrote an essay on a mere three lines. Now I understand why you cannot comment on my other stuff. Some of it is over ten lines. You only get four hundred characters, I realize... LOL … Susan, thank you as always for your warm words. Best wishes, Gershon