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Distant Gleams

Distant gleams twinkle Beckon sailors, landlubbers Thousand points of light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/8/2018 1:48:00 PM
Your lovely imagery brings to mind the brilliant sparkles above the sea, especially with the impact of your last line - which, also brings to mind a G.H.W.B. moment back in time, which unfortunately also seems like a distant gleam.. An awesome multi-dimensional haiku, Gershon. Warmest wishes my dear friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/8/2018 4:21:00 PM
Hmmm, dear Gershon, over the past couple days I’ve commented on two of your recent poems ‘A Future Here And Now’ and ‘Dawn Takes Wing’ and both are 12 and 10 lines respectively.. so I can and I do comment on your longer poems.. Lol!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/8/2018 2:12:00 PM
Gosh, you wrote an essay on a mere three lines. Now I understand why you cannot comment on my other stuff. Some of it is over ten lines. You only get four hundred characters, I realize... LOL … Susan, thank you as always for your warm words. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/3/2018 2:41:00 PM
you light the seas with this lustrous 'ku, gershon... very nice!...huggs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2018 4:16:00 PM
I really appreciate your support, nette. Thank you so much for the encouragement. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/3/2018 9:25:00 AM
Cool poem my friend :) xomo!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2018 4:17:00 PM
To be read on a hot day! Thank you so much, as always, Maureen, for all the encouragement. All the best, gw
Date: 10/3/2018 12:17:00 AM
Beautiful image Gershon, the beauty of the heavens. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom. ~ gw
Date: 10/2/2018 11:20:00 PM
A beautiful haiku...enchanting!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you for your support, Kim. Appreciated! ~ gw

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