Get Your Premium Membership

Distant

It was an instant attraction but somewhere it split , a cosmic reaction but somehow it fizzled. We came together so fast, we lost sight of the past. Same mistakes things undone, we walked when maybe we should have run. I was mad I was sad, took my pace said we needed space. You were gone, I knew I was wrong. I knew in an instant, we became distant.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/26/2012 11:55:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Mary. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 7/23/2012 1:58:00 AM
Hi Mary - this is nice. Fizzled cosmic reaction? Whoa! You really know how to paint an image!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/20/2012 12:20:00 AM
I really like this poem, can relate to it so well, Beautifully done. You should check out a few of mine :)
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things