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Just to be sure I read his letter again There was no hint of any obvious pain, Though I sensed some things unsaid It wasn't anything in particular he said. The distance between his words spread And sentences read like averting dread, Not loud enough for me to hear his sigh Not sad enough for me to utter a cry. Though scent of letter courted fragrant air Aromatic smell was curiously unfamiliar. I did spot an attempt at overt disguise It wasn't the most blatant effort to lie. His epistle grew a bit strange and unknown The return address he used was his own, But postal stamp showed he was with her In her home town when he mailed the letter. October 13, 2017

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Date: 10/25/2017 4:01:00 PM
Scintillating write, Vijay. Who doesn't like a good romantic mystery. You delivered this w/measured poetic gusto. Bravo. Wonderful poem. Star bright poetry. Love and smiles forever.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Freddie!
Date: 10/14/2017 9:32:00 AM
I felt every little gap....
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2017 9:41:00 AM
Many thanks Pashang!
Date: 10/13/2017 2:32:00 PM
beautiful in its forlorn tone, vijay... what a dreadful turn of events... very fine write..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2017 7:59:00 PM
Thank you nette!
Date: 10/13/2017 12:59:00 PM
Oh my, a very interesting write,Vijay,, I want to hear more.. nicely written you got my attention :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2017 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 10/13/2017 11:53:00 AM
An interesting one, vijay and it makes me curious to know more about the circumstances!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2017 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Andrea--just fiction--if it made you curious that was the intent!
Date: 10/13/2017 6:53:00 AM
This write is one that I feel saddened with, a letter that has torn the fabric of yourself just by the plainness of the words, something is missing, but it's not obvious! I really enjoyed reading this remarkable piece this morning! What a heartfelt poem, one of pain and sadness! Great Work my friend!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Russell!
Date: 10/13/2017 6:53:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Vijay ... The twist in the last stanza is interesting ..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Probir!

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