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Dissipating Girl

Lost in a dismal forest Sitting on a bench Sits a dissipating girl A confusing wench The two disappear Dissolving from bottom up Bringing a great fear
Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/17/2012 1:48:00 PM
a very mysterious one, my friend!! Hope you enjoy your weekend!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/16/2012 12:45:00 AM
intriguing premise with exceptional rhyme frame my friend .. a visual caviot of edgy romance surrounded by fear .. exquisite Russell luv ..
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