Dissipating Girl

Lost in a dismal forest Sitting on a bench Sits a dissipating girl A confusing wench The two disappear Dissolving from bottom up Bringing a great fear
Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 1:48 PM
a very mysterious one, my friend!! Hope you enjoy your weekend!! Luv, Andrea
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November 16, 2012 at 12:45 AM
intriguing premise with exceptional rhyme frame my friend .. a visual caviot of edgy romance surrounded by fear .. exquisite Russell luv ..
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