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Disrupted

puffy clouds regal
     float in wind swept spaces
                     lift
         brown flecked eagle

      birds in mishmash flight
        breaching boundaries
                    vexed
        by jets thwarting height

        courtship songs tumbling
        planes intrusive rumbling
        environmental grumbling










Poem written:  March 24, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/11/2021 1:54:00 AM
I love this Brian. A wonderful message in so few lines of wonderful verse. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/11/2021 7:38:00 AM
Hello Gary, Thanks kindly for your affirmative message. I struggle with rhyme + so much appreciate your note. All the best, Brian
Date: 7/10/2021 1:39:00 AM
Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/10/2021 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. Be well. Brian

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