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Disquieting Tears

Emotional rush when quite hearts tear leaving a void onerous to repair. Unloving compassion torments me so drowns benevolent heart to overflow. Hiding in shadows with a want to kill forsakes a doubtful soul to grasp this thrill. Understanding cannot be understood when selfish being declines to do good. Tears stain soft cheeks on a cold hard pillow flow out of control like stormy billow. A bruised heart shatters when a killer takes one or multitude my heart still aches. Copyright © 2012 By Caryl S. Muzzey Written: 7/24/12 Second Place Winner ~ "One Silver Tear” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lisa Cooper July 27, 2012

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Date: 8/1/2012 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "One Silver Tear" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:21:00 PM
CARYL., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in LISA'S' contest..... always~ PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 6:44:00 AM
congrats Caryl on a fabulous write and win .. very touching luv..
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Date: 7/28/2012 10:45:00 PM
Congrats on your deserving won, Caryl, with your heartbreaking wrote. Love and Blessings
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Date: 7/28/2012 9:12:00 AM
Caryl, congrats on your win with this moving piece! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/28/2012 4:14:00 AM
Caryl, congrats on your win, excellent..David
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