Disquieting Tears

Emotional rush when quite hearts tear
leaving a void onerous to repair.
Unloving compassion torments me so
drowns benevolent heart to overflow.  

Hiding in shadows with a want to kill
forsakes a doubtful soul to grasp this thrill.
Understanding cannot be understood
when selfish being declines to do good.

Tears stain soft cheeks on a cold hard pillow
flow out of control like stormy billow.
A bruised heart shatters when a killer takes
one or multitude my heart still aches.

Copyright © 2012 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Written: 7/24/12

Second Place Winner ~ "One Silver Tear” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Lisa Cooper
July 27, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "One Silver Tear" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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July 29, 2012 at 10:21 PM
CARYL., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in LISA'S' contest..... always~ PD
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 6:44 AM
congrats Caryl on a fabulous write and win .. very touching luv..
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July 28, 2012 at 10:45 PM
Congrats on your deserving won, Caryl, with your heartbreaking wrote. Love and Blessings
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July 28, 2012 at 9:12 AM
Caryl, congrats on your win with this moving piece! Love, Kim
Williams Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 4:14 AM
Caryl, congrats on your win, excellent..David
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