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Disquieting Momento

DISQUIETING MEMENTO Lone leaf upon the earth is red, amidst the mountain’s grief of dust. A civil war sent boys to bed. Lone leaf upon the earth is red. “War is hell,” the old have said. Why does it steal the youth, robust? Amidst the mountain’s grief of dust, Lone leaf upon the earth is red. 8/30/2017 Triolet Form

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Date: 8/31/2017 8:36:00 AM
Now cut that out!!! Making the triolet look easy....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2017 9:35:00 AM
LOL! :) I appreciate!
Date: 8/30/2017 4:57:00 PM
Not an easy form to do well, but you've succeeded. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thanks, Maurice! :)
Date: 8/30/2017 4:01:00 PM
Very nicely done my friend. I like how this felt as I read it, even though the subject matter is sad. Well expressed thoughts Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris! <3
Date: 8/30/2017 3:17:00 PM
Lovely in its melancholy and beautifully expressed in your sensitive and poetic words Kim! I truly enjoyed :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thanks, Susan! :)
Date: 8/30/2017 2:02:00 PM
Sounds peaceful but evokes emotion! A lovely form, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!

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