Disquiet

Mercury shots up Now hand in hand the tremor Your restless centre -------------------------------- April 14, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2016 6:34:00 PM

Quite interesting one. Not a theme often explored

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 8:24:00 PM

Glad at the way of looking at...Thanks....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2016 8:59:00 AM

Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 11:39:00 PM

Thanks Sara you liked it...Regards...

Sarah Power

Date: 4/13/2016 11:47:00 PM

I keep reading this over & over. Sets the imagination to work. I like it as Haiku, love it as an opening for a scene or story. I'm already hooked, and pretty sure someone needs a hug.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 11:59:00 PM

A novel comment Deserves heartfelt thanks and love A red and white blarb