Disquiet

Mercury shots up
Now hand in hand the tremor
Your restless centre
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April 14, 2016
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Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Quite interesting one. Not a theme often explored
Gupta Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Glad at the way of looking at...Thanks....
Kendrick Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Gupta Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:39 PM
Thanks Sara you liked it...Regards...
Power Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 11:47 PM
I keep reading this over & over. Sets the imagination to work. I like it as Haiku, love it as an opening for a scene or story. I'm already hooked, and pretty sure someone needs a hug.
Gupta Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 11:59 PM
A novel comment Deserves heartfelt thanks and love A red and white blarb
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