Disproportionate

Nothing seems to thus allign In this Void of Trapezoids Rhombus Squares and Hexagrams Dance with Parallelograms Diamond Stars and circle Scars- A Paragon will lead me on What Circumference? Length and Width? Dimensions of a Cubic Myth Radius high; Volume low A Symmetry Divides my Soul

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/12/2013 8:36:00 PM

I can also see some metaphor in this that would apply to the psyche... with all the different dimensions ... especially because of the last line. I really see the relationship with math now that I read your comment ... either way it is brilliant

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/13/2013 10:08:00 AM

Math, in itself, vexes my psyche, so I think that's why I added some metaphysical traits to an otherwise...what's the word I'm looking for here..."clinical" or "concrete" subject. Maybe "academic" is the word for which I'm hunting; hmmmmmmm

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/11/2013 8:04:00 PM

To Samuel's comment, "Symmetry Divides my Soul" would be a little tighter. He would probably stumble quite often in my work :) I like his critiques

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 9:29:00 AM

I changed it ;)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/11/2013 8:01:00 PM

Infinite quality with talent unmatched. A spatial delight :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 9:29:00 AM

I think I wrote this during one of my failed attempts at college, when I had to take a math class, and I despise math. My brain does not work in numbers. It's my "middle-finger" to math poem lol