Debra Squyres Poet Kimo

Dispersed Dreams and Visions

Dispersed Dreams and Visions

Dawn awakens to dreams of magic dust
Captured in an avalanche
Of visions slumbered

Dreams and visions evaporate quickly
When aired in morning’s first light
Slipping from present view

Scattered images fade all to quickly
like morning snow melts away
slowly into the ground

Crumbling thoughts of dreamland adventure
Swept rapidly from mind’s sight
Longing for breath of light



By: Debra Squyres 2013 All Rights Reserved
Kimo Cluster inspired by the following written comment of Robert Johnson on one of my poems:

“So many times we lose the fight 
to capture thoughts that we don't write. 
Dawning dreams of magic dust 
We breathe it in, it turns to rust. 
An avalanche of slumber snow. 
Covers up what we no longer know.”

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Debbie Duncan February 16, 2013 at 5:36 PM This is awesome Debbie,,, I think that when I wake up and see my dreams fade away.

Jim Pemberton February 8, 2013 at 5:23 AM Thank you for your thoughts and comments! God bless you!!!

Robert Johnson February 6, 2013 at 4:54 PM Thanks for the mention my friend. I'm glad you are writting so my comments, I can send. Reiteration, I understand. Just bouncing thoughts that we never planned. :)

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2013 at 2:35 PM Reads like a winner to me..Great that you could use another poem as a stepping stone to write one for a contest..Thanks for stopping by..Those wrens and sparrows are beautiful when one looks at them with binoculars and sees the colors...Sara

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2013 at 11:54 PM wow, way to get yourself inspired. Isn't Robert marvelous the way he does those rhyming comments? I swear some of his comments he ought to bottle them and then post them as his own poetry. He would have a lot more poems posted and very worthy ones! Debra Squyres February 6, 2013 at 10:14 AM Oh yes he is !! I've told him he needs to place them in his poem list. This one could stand alone... I wonder why he isn't writing. Though I know he has limited time of computer use. Sad, for he is a good poet.

Russell Sivey February 5, 2013 at 2:11 PM I see you were quite inspired, and from this inspiration came some great Kimos! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a positive piece, Great work!!