Dismembered

I had a love, but it flew like a bird
out of the cage but never heard.

I had a voice that spoke with tenderness,
rendered softly, but now I digress.       

My charm was thick and melted like butter.
Now it's forming artery clutter.

I had ballooned lungs that clung to your air,
but your absence left a pulmonary tear.

My eyes, once wide, indulged your beauty,
but they can't relay what a heart can see.    

I had a heart like a tender, ripe plum,
but it's been chewed like shoe-stuck gum.

Honey dripped from my playful mouth.
Now it's tasted onion, hard to brush out.

My belly would flutter with butterflies.
Now they've come out like powdered lies.

My ears were entranced with your melody.
They pranced like deer... into a tree.

I had pennies wasted on vain wishes.
Now they're poisoning the fishes. 
   
My nose was enclosed with rose's scent,
but it blew with the breeze, a memory spent.

Secure were my arms in your sturdy care.
Now they're free, yet lonely, bare.

I had soft hands, interlocked with yours.
Now they hold open their own doors.

Silken were these legs you loved to caress.
I keep them neatly under my dress.

These eyebrows gave raise with praised arousal.
Now they're abased, full of sorrow.

I had a mile-wide smile like a child's for cake.
Now, I faintly make one, but it's a fake.

I had instincts, but I let them go
like a rambling tongue for ego's show.    

I had a notion that this would end,
but remained devoted like an owing friend.

Deep were my regrets of yesterday's crime, 
but they've been bleached like toilet grime.

I had cavernous wounds, dripping with blood,
with prints that followed like galoshes of mud.

I had a self, differently sorted,
once vibrantly alive, now aborted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 1:03 AM
wow, so many vivid contrasts to enjoy in this favorite poem of yours. Glad to see it posted. And I see it won the contest, so BIG congrats.
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December 8, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Juliet, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
Deschler Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Lost love will do that to a person! I think we can all relate to this poem. I like the flow of your words here, and the rhyming was great, too. I really love the title! Very nice work, Juliet! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem!
Bantawa Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:59 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN! A LOVELY POEM .
Ligon Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Thanks so much, Kiran!
Guzzi Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Ligon Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Thanks so much, Debbie!
Tacito Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 11:50 AM
Insane roller coaster of a writing. Tremendous impact in your lines. Well done!
Ligon Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Thanks so much, Drake!
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Congrats on the win, Juliet
Ligon Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Dr!
Mcdaid Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 7:55 AM
very beautifully crafted piece
Ligon Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Thanks so much, Liam!
Horsch Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Congrats Juliet, A very nice win and a well written poem...Roger
Ligon Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:49 PM
Thanks, Roger!
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:42 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Juliet !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise!
Collins Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 8:00 AM
Dear Juliet - Every image displays unique ability to tweak the cobwebs called my brain. "I had a charm that it melted like butter. Now it's forming artery clutter." "I had pennies wasted on vain wishes. Now they're poisoning the fishes" Blood stains hidden under the rug. Amazing poem. love, Kathy -
Ligon Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:49 PM
Thanks so much, Kathryn!
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