Randy Steele Poet Rhyme

Dismay

The formation stood just over five feet tall
It stayed unmoving in a frosty sleep
Bright sun appeared, dismay to all
The formation could not keep
Buttons started to slide
To Alyssa's dread
Snowman cried
Melted

March 21, 2018
Melting Snowball contest

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Susan Gentry April 19, 2018 at 10:55 AM Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper April 17, 2018 at 8:02 PM Congratulations on your win, Randy .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 12:06 PM - Best wishes and congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest, Randy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison April 17, 2018 at 11:16 AM what a charming poem Randy, i love the final couple of lines!:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier April 17, 2018 at 10:40 AM Lovely, Randy. Loved how you slipped in the word 'frosty' way before the word snowman. Congrats on your bronze medal finish. Well done.

Mick Talbot April 1, 2018 at 9:35 PM HAha, great, loved the punch line. Many thanks for your visit... Mick