Dismay

The formation stood just over five feet tall It stayed unmoving in a frosty sleep Bright sun appeared, dismay to all The formation could not keep Buttons started to slide To Alyssa's dread Snowman cried Melted March 21, 2018 Melting Snowball contest

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/19/2018 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/17/2018 8:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Randy .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2018 12:06:00 PM

- Best wishes and congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest, Randy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2018 11:16:00 AM

what a charming poem Randy, i love the final couple of lines!:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/17/2018 10:40:00 AM

Lovely, Randy. Loved how you slipped in the word 'frosty' way before the word snowman. Congrats on your bronze medal finish. Well done.

Mick Talbot

Date: 4/1/2018 9:35:00 PM

HAha, great, loved the punch line. Many thanks for your visit... Mick