Alexis Y. Poet Rhyme

Dismal Dreams- Rhyme Time With 5

The threshold of my life is dark and bleak,
Dismal dreams haunt me,peace is all I seek.
Bloodstained covers are wrapped around me,
My piteous life is nothing at all, so too speak
I loathe my conception, darkness is all I see



1.) piteous  

2.) bloodstained 

3.) threshold 

4.) conception 

5.) dismal
















10-1-17

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 3, 2017 at 2:15 PM I feel the dark in this poem, Alexis. Excellent imagery and well-expressed emotional agony. This makes for an heart engaging poem to read. Splendid write, my friend. Love and hugs always.

Joseph May October 2, 2017 at 12:26 PM You did this very well Alexis..GL in the contest..

Cheryl Hoffman October 2, 2017 at 9:22 AM Awesome write using the five words Alexis! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Silent One October 1, 2017 at 1:36 PM You did this very well Alexis.. Alexis Y. October 1, 2017 at 2:17 PM Hi Silent, Thank you very much. I hope Laura thinks so too:-) Alexis