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Disintegration Flows

Anything better, than writing a good poem, The rationale the experience, light is shown, That feeling we get, ambivalence disbelief, Most importantly, incredible sense of relief, Where’d you find this one, infusion can pour, Never realized, what my mind kept in store, Satisfaction of words, gateways to new worlds, Rolling out a carpet, watch the cosmos unfurl, Simplicity in reason, complexity underlines, A love of tragedy, some loathing intertwined, Pretentious language, bloating ornate scorn, Real life sentiment, plainly written in mourn, Adaptations from prose, can turn into rhyme, Inconformity by absence, once upon a time, Static electricity, suddenly releases its shock, Snipers bullet ricochets, accuracy’s mocked, Filling in gaps, a semiautomatic on the range, Cover up cracks, choice words interchange, Indifference by neutrality, friend becomes foe, Empathetic maudlin sentiment, faking woes, Concoction of rhythm, low cacophony of noise, Out of kilter pandemonium, melds into poise, Creatures of darkness, playing under my bed, Enlightened angels, singing dirges in my head, Take me back home, don’t throw away the key, Locked in syndrome, eyes barely able to see, In the beginning, everything started out bright, Then darkness descended, burying me in night. By David Kavanagh.

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Date: 10/24/2020 10:07:00 PM
Great question David ? Anything better than writing a great poem ? No Not for me mate Keeps one awake at night Wishing and hoping one only could or had
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/25/2020 6:29:00 PM
Off the cuff but cutting David. Not that i was ever going to use it but it most definitely is worthy or doable
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/25/2020 4:37:00 PM
I just used it as a remark Christopher so feel free to use it anytime if I see nothing up in a couple of weeks I might take a look and see if it’s doable cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/25/2020 12:57:00 PM
David please read your comment back again my friend The only thing better than a great poem is an even better comment. What wonderful clever insight to point out the most glaring of facts that a great poem then indeed Raises the Status of other poems that were Breezed over but are Still the Same. You should definitely write and post that as a poem in iteslf before i or someone else shall we say appropriates it from you. Told you you we're getting better David.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/25/2020 1:11:00 AM
Put it this way Christopher if you write one great one then all your others will raise in status alongside it, what people just breeze over now becomes a must read, yet it’s still the same, mad! cheers David

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