Disintegrating

I lean against the
Wind and watch as pieces of
Myself fly away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Willow Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 6:49 AM
This is so good. WW
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December 10, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Interesting perspective for a creative view. I found myself reading it over a few times. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
Mchugh Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 4:39 PM
Groovy.
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December 9, 2009 at 4:38 PM
Cool Haiku, Jessica., but pull yourself together there ! We need more poems! :) -Robert
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