Disfigured

Displaced

shattered

disfigured.....

aching on the ground

I fall into the stream of disregard

forgotten by all

I thought held me

in contempt of heart...

brittle skeletons

left to move

fast through vast

dreams and memories

left to be stranded, to be strong

and I wonder

can I do it

and be proud

of who I am

of who I was

before you

branded me

bruised me

before you stole my generations

before you knelt in front of me eye to eye

and stole my crown like a wolf in sheep's clothing

and I stand bare,

as you walk this earth…

a martyr with everything,

plus my strength,

my heart and all it had to give

you walk

and the smile

you ripped from my face!

do you wear it proud?

skeletons in your closet now

how close do they lay

to the surface of your skin

as you sleep at night?

This pool of abandonment

drowns my last breath of life

and I try to walk

bent

but I am not dead-written by-amy everett

written for CT
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Torres Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 11:20 AM
Amy I sensed your relationship went sour. This is very expressive. You can feel all the pain you went through, in your writing. There are good christian women on this sight as well as men that if you needed advice and you felt depressed that could help. just post a comment asking for help on any of the poets comments. God bless you again andyour son too.
Jordan Avatar
September 26, 2008 at 3:01 PM
It has always bothered me how some people play with others hearts, lives and emotions. very well written and I liked the hope that you added in the last line - Welcome to the Soup - God Bless
Winter Avatar
September 25, 2008 at 5:04 PM
Forgot to say welcome to the soup! Well, this sure sounds like you met up with the wrong kind of person. Love your somewhat hopeful ending, as I see some strength shining through. Good for you and good luck. Well expressed. Love, Shar
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