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Discovery

Living life in solitude, hiding in the dark Cloistered in my minds cocoon, fearful to embark Shying from reality, my world was make believe I could not get beyond myself, to fantasy I cleaved That is when you found me and entered my domain Leading with your gentle hand, my confidence you gained And slowly you helped me to see, the beauty past my door You opened up my eyes to see a world not seen before And with your love to guide me, two hearts now united You filled my days with sunshine, a new spark you ignited Without you I would still be lost, my options would be few It was you that opened up the door, and you that led me through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/7/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Opened Door" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/7/2011 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 10/6/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Thanks for giving congratulation to me. I read your Discovery, nicely you penned. Thanks, bl
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/6/2011 1:16:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words bl
Date: 9/26/2011 11:12:00 AM
From first to last this is a gem to be treaasured. Tender sentiments flow from your heart to the reader. I love it!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/26/2011 11:41:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words Elizabeth
Date: 9/25/2011 6:32:00 PM
Lovely poem, Bob. Kim
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/26/2011 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Much appreciated
Date: 9/25/2011 11:26:00 AM
An intriguing journey of two hearts Bob, really enjoyed your gem this afternoon.. ;) Wilma
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/25/2011 11:47:00 AM
Glad that you enjoyed it Wilma. Thanks for stopping by.

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