Stacy Alduenda Poet Carpe Diem

Discovering How To Use the Potty

Tortoisaurus and his friend Noah T.
are discovering how to use the pott-y
It's something that all  boyz n' girlz do
so get up on your feet n' you'll learn too
First we march in the bathroom stompin r'  feet 
just stompin our feet to the dino beat
Next we step up on stool come on it's cool
now we pull r' pants n' undies all the way down
Sit upon our potty n' wiggle around
now you have finished ,don't forget to wipe
We wipe with toilet paper mornin, noon and night 
we pull r' pants n' undies all the way up 
Saying Bye Bye to pott-y and give it a flush.

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Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2016 at 11:13 AM Stacy, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Joseph Spence Sr May 17, 2009 at 11:53 AM Hello Stacy, great job and best wishes in the next round. ~Joseph

Raul Moreno May 3, 2009 at 11:31 AM Stacy, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason April 22, 2009 at 8:55 AM Sooooooooo clever, Stacy ... a new and unique write here at the Soup ... don't think I've ever seen one one this subject! Congratulations on your "first round survivor" ... and good luck with the contest!!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 9, 2009 at 7:37 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan April 5, 2009 at 9:59 AM Stacy - Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round, best of luck in the finals – God Bless, MJ

Samantha Mcdougal April 4, 2009 at 9:53 PM Oh, how paternal of you.

Adeleke Adeite April 4, 2009 at 5:21 PM a well deserved survival. congrats, all the best in the finals. keep writing... love Leke

Carrie Richards April 2, 2009 at 5:58 PM I remember this clever, fun poem, and so glad to see it among the winning semi-final selected poems!! ~ Congratulations!! Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown November 19, 2008 at 5:32 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

November 18, 2008 at 5:05 PM Cute write. Maybe a story like this would have helped me with the whole "potty training" nightmare. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr. November 17, 2008 at 10:30 AM After raising three boys and a girl, this one is special. Congratulations on having it featured. Vince