Disconnected

I walk by silently.

Sit down in the hush.

but my mind screams:

Look at me.

Notice me.

Someone do something.

Someone say something to break this awful silence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 5, 2010 at 7:14 PM
Very good poem.Keep posting.Keep connected :) kashinath
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December 3, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Excellent. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Kelly. Love, Carol
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December 2, 2010 at 8:01 PM
wow very strong images here my friend
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