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Discombobulation

the sky is falling the fall is crying the cry is calling the call is dying the dye is casting the cast is resting the rest is lasting the last is testing the test is boring the bore is lying the lie is scoring the score is tying the tie is binding the bind is grating the grate is grinding the grind is waiting the wait is ending the end is stopping © Oct 22 2010

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Date: 11/6/2010 10:05:00 AM
The spirit of your poem has a knack for expressing expediency of comming to the head of completion, Charles. I think that might be where our nation is heading. Thanks for your comment. Haaaaaa! Yep, a little thick! But, that seems to be the game. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/23/2010 12:34:00 PM
Wow! This is brilliant. So much said crisply in short lines that grip the reader, Charles. Another favorite from you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:28:00 PM
Neat write Charles with the rollover of words line to line.. and your title is the best one on the list today luv.. enjoyed this creative theme ..happy weekend with luv...
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:05:00 PM
LOVELY
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:51:00 PM
Very witty yet and very nice interplay of the words penned well, Charles
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Date: 10/22/2010 9:17:00 AM
the poem is witty // the wit is Charles // the Charles is funny // the fun is in the poem
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