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"Every time he looked at me I felt like I'd touched my tongue to the tip of a battery.... a girl doesn't think straight when she's that close to electrocution." --Cath Crowley

Discombobulation

I keep seeing you in strange places.
My heart flutters, you grin at me.
I blush and I turn away.
You are too dangerous,
and you know you are!
Maybe next time
we will speak;
maybe
not!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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January 23, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Encountering someone who is emotionally captivating but also potentially dangerous, could trigger an internal struggle with their attraction to this person, a lovely poem.
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January 23, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Thank you.
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