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Discombobulated

Discombobulation Interrupts my concentration In the darkest corner of my mind It's sinuous coils unwind And because of it's intrusion I'm caught up in confusion My thoughts become so scattered And the thing that really mattered The track that I was following The snake is busy swallowing I wish I could combobulate And concentrate to meditate

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Date: 2/15/2024 10:33:00 AM
An extremely fun word flow and usage. Congratulations!
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Aly Bahr
Date: 2/24/2024 9:54:00 PM
Thank you kindly Robert.
Date: 2/2/2024 4:47:00 PM
Stinking snakes! Always causing mischief
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/3/2024 5:51:00 AM
Slithery thoughts?
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Aly Bahr
Date: 2/2/2024 10:52:00 PM
Hahaha Tom. Actually I think snakes are a beautiful creature, here out in the bush in Australia we have plenty, but they generally leave you alone if you leave them alone. And they eat the mice and rats. The snakes in the mind though....

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