Disclosure

Some question if there was full disclosure
When we decided to follow Jesus to this earth.
Were we told the nature of mortal exposure?
Did we know the challenges beginning at birth?

I doubt not that we made an informed choice,
And were, indeed, told of what we’d confront.
The truth likely came from God’s own voice
Lest lack of knowledge give cause for affront.

So we took the fated step with faith affirmed.
And bravely entered this formidable estate,
Where Christ-like acts our decision confirmed.
Though evil acts by some showed another trait.

On a coming day we must give God a full report
Of how we did living in this mortal sphere.
The righteous will garner His blessed support,
And those who erred could have much to fear.

Yes, I know this worn Sunday School sermon
Is simplistic, naïve, juvenile, and out of fashion.
It is mocked by the elite and some in ermine
But those next to God embrace it with passion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 11, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Paul..this is an wonderful poem! If you don't mind..I will print this poem and read it to a friend who really would benefit from your words. He is going through some trials in his life..and I know this poem will help him out tremendously. Thank you so much for your wise words and for sharing this most excellent poem. Take care. Be blessed. -Jennifer M.
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November 11, 2014 at 6:47 AM
Jennifer, I'm honored that you feel this poem has the potential to help your friend. Feel free to use it, and thanks for your kind, thoughtful words. God bless you and all your loved ones.
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November 9, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Great poem, Paul! it is not out of fashion for me. And its wonderful to embrace the love and goodness of the true God anytime. The whole world one day will fall to their knees and worship the Lord of Lord, God and His Son Jesus Christ. And so it says the Holiest of books, the Holy Bible. :) love and hugs! xxx D.
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November 9, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Thank you, Dorian. I sincerely appreciate—and value—your thoughtful, encouraging words. You have helped to make my evening!
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November 9, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Very good Poem Paul. I love spiritual ones. you did a great job
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November 9, 2014 at 10:09 PM
Thank you, Jasmine. I draw strength from kind, encouraging words such as yours. Please know of my gratitude.
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