Mohamed Omar Poet Rhyme

Disciple Shadow

Though live ,no one cares to see.
 For I am the shadow to be . 
  Always around . 
   Never in sky, just on ground . 
    A light shade .
     Ready to vanish but never fade.
      The best to be is black . 
       Live in light ,die in dark .
        The ultimate disciple to follow . 
         Every where and gallow .
          For I am nothing with out you .
           Just black ,never red nor blue.


24 Aug 2021

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Alkas Poetry August 25, 2021 at 8:48 AM God bless you in your struggle to be free... salute alkas Mohamed Omar July 17, 2023 at 12:43 AM Honored and grateful to your beautiful words from a beautiful poets, like you Mohamed Omar August 25, 2021 at 10:00 AM Honored by your words . Thanks

Regina Mcintosh August 24, 2021 at 11:39 AM Intriguing. God bless you always, Love, Gina Mohamed Omar July 17, 2023 at 12:43 AM Grateful to you and honored by you Mohamed Omar August 24, 2021 at 3:11 PM God bless you sweet poetss

Victor Buhagiar August 24, 2021 at 3:03 AM I love poems with an argument inn them. Mohamed Omar July 17, 2023 at 12:44 AM I do appreciate your words thank you Mohamed Omar August 24, 2021 at 3:50 AM Thank you , I like to stir the thoughts in people.

Kudzai Mhangwa August 24, 2021 at 1:45 AM Very moving piece! Brings about feelings of dependency and a complicated relationship. Mohamed Omar July 17, 2023 at 12:44 AM Honored by you Mohamed Omar August 24, 2021 at 1:55 AM The way you described the poem is pure poetry . Salute