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Disciple Shadow

Though live ,no one cares to see. For I am the shadow to be . Always around . Never in sky, just on ground . A light shade . Ready to vanish but never fade. The best to be is black . Live in light ,die in dark . The ultimate disciple to follow . Every where and gallow . For I am nothing with out you . Just black ,never red nor blue. 24 Aug 2021

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Date: 8/25/2021 8:48:00 AM
God bless you in your struggle to be free... salute alkas
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 7/17/2023 12:43:00 AM
Honored and grateful to your beautiful words from a beautiful poets, like you
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/25/2021 10:00:00 AM
Honored by your words . Thanks
Date: 8/24/2021 11:39:00 AM
Intriguing. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 7/17/2023 12:43:00 AM
Grateful to you and honored by you
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/24/2021 3:11:00 PM
God bless you sweet poetss
Date: 8/24/2021 3:03:00 AM
I love poems with an argument inn them.
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 7/17/2023 12:44:00 AM
I do appreciate your words thank you
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/24/2021 3:50:00 AM
Thank you , I like to stir the thoughts in people.
Date: 8/24/2021 1:45:00 AM
Very moving piece! Brings about feelings of dependency and a complicated relationship.
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 7/17/2023 12:44:00 AM
Honored by you
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/24/2021 1:55:00 AM
The way you described the poem is pure poetry . Salute

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