Notes About The Poem

Discerning Heart

Will
    thoughts
discern 
your heart

arouse
    or
will fear

  fail
to witness
    love

a challenge
proving
    God
is love
    power

   utter
words
abundance
   of the heart

    whisper
in my ear

    arouse
my heart

1/4/2022
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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Perfectly expressed Eve. Just one question “ fell to witness love” did you mean “fail to witness love”? My note pad changes my words all the time and I don’t notice it until later. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 11:31 AM
Thank you, Connie, I like you always have my 6. Bless you my friend
Kauffman Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 10:17 AM
Words to ponder dear friend - "utter words abundance of the heart," "arouse my heart." Beautifully spoken words Eve. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of joy and gladness for the new year.
Alex Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 8:07 AM
Great work. Congratulations!
Bowden Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 11:41 PM
A very endearing piece. Congrats on your win.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 8:24 AM
This whispers of hearts and flowers Eve
Buhagiar Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 2:37 AM
A great style though not for me. I love longer lines. But you write a very intelligent poem. Hugs.
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