Discarded Flowers

hung with their seems sealed
Roses in a wheat paste field…
Peeling paint revealed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Nice picture of the flowers discarded with good images, Robb
Roberts Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 7:48 AM
wonderful haiku Robb
Richards Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Good one!! unique and clever. Shows what we might observe if we look closely at our surroundings!! :)
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