Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Disaster

I went for my early morning run,
just me and my young son.
It was to be a lot of fun,
then home for a hot cross bun.
We waved to Mary's grandson,
then it had all begun.
My shoe came untied.
I almost died.
Come on one spiritual guide,
I cried.
One must hold on to their pride, 
disaster is about to show real wide.
Down I went,
did the concrete now have a dent?
It all peeked off to the bright morning sun.

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Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen May 11, 2024 at 7:01 AM Ouch sorry to hear about your fall lovely write many blessings Paula Goldsmith May 11, 2024 at 7:33 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Disaster" write/story. I am OK... "Not True" It is just a fun write. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..................

Hilda Greenhough May 6, 2024 at 9:32 PM This is a cute poem but I hope you didn't give up running. I do my walking on a gym treadmill. Just be careful out there. Keep writing. Paula Goldsmith May 7, 2024 at 8:33 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Disaster" write/story. "Not True" It is just a fun write. I do like to walk a lot. Have a fun day writing away..................

Paul Bell May 6, 2024 at 10:51 AM Did your son laugh, or did he run off and leave you, pretending he didn't know you. On the plus side, the sun was shining. Paula Goldsmith May 6, 2024 at 12:31 PM Thanks for reading/writing on my "Disaster" write. Glad you enjoyed my fun story. "Not True" It is just a fun write... Have a fun day/week writing away..................

Paula Goldsmith May 6, 2024 at 9:51 AM Sponsored by: Sotto Poet ~ Title 3/Disaster ~ Date Written: 5/6/2024 ~ "Not True" It is just a fun write...