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Disaster

I went for my early morning run,
just me and my young son.
It was to be a lot of fun,
then home for a hot cross bun.
We waved to Mary's grandson,
then it had all begun.
My shoe came untied.
I almost died.
Come on one spiritual guide,
I cried.
One must hold on to their pride,
disaster is about to show real wide.
Down I went,
did the concrete now have a dent?
It all peeked off to the bright morning sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/11/2024 7:01:00 AM
Ouch sorry to hear about your fall lovely write many blessings
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/11/2024 7:33:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Disaster" write/story. I am OK... "Not True" It is just a fun write. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..................
Date: 5/6/2024 9:32:00 PM
This is a cute poem but I hope you didn't give up running. I do my walking on a gym treadmill. Just be careful out there. Keep writing.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/7/2024 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Disaster" write/story. "Not True" It is just a fun write. I do like to walk a lot. Have a fun day writing away..................
Date: 5/6/2024 10:51:00 AM
Did your son laugh, or did he run off and leave you, pretending he didn't know you. On the plus side, the sun was shining.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2024 12:31:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing on my "Disaster" write. Glad you enjoyed my fun story. "Not True" It is just a fun write... Have a fun day/week writing away..................
Date: 5/6/2024 9:51:00 AM
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet ~ Title 3/Disaster ~ Date Written: 5/6/2024 ~ "Not True" It is just a fun write...
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