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Lanterne

A lanterne is a type of poem that has one syllable in the first line, two syllables in the second line, three syllables in the third line, four syllables in the fourth line, and one syllable in the fifth line that relates to the first word of the poem.

Dusk descends, discreetly disassembling Dawn. Dew drips down, dispensing dispersible drops. (Lanterne) Mar. 11, 2019 Light Up The Page 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 3/31/2019 10:36:00 AM
Hello Emile, I like this poem that you created.As i read this poem I can picture this scene. So i have a question: Does this type of poetry have to be in capitals letters.or can some of these letters be small ones? Thank you my friend.Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/1/2019 8:08:00 AM
thank you for answering my question. Later on i will try this form. Have a nice day my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2019 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, I am not aware of any requirement to capitalize any of the letters...it is up to your preference my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2019 5:47:00 PM
Glad to see this one scored high, Emile. Congrats.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2019 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2019 11:12:00 AM
Congrats! Adding to favs!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2019 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Juliet, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2019 8:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2019 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2019 4:53:00 PM
Beautiful write Emile..Congrats on your win..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2019 6:24:00 PM
Thank you Joseph, I'm grateful for your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2019 3:48:00 PM
Awesome!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2019 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/11/2019 10:16:00 AM
Love the first verse, its imagery and alliteration!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2019 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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