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Disappointment

Diappointment thank you rain – for raining now for big drops falling for my feeling you show the names my head is calling the pictures it draw thanks sky to be that grey grey like my feeling walking in an deserted bay knowing, water brings healing streams like a feeling - never stay! In the sand i am kneeling talking silently to the water: Hey! thank you ocean for being that deep for surrounding me like a lotion for sharing my grief for freeing me from torture

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Date: 4/5/2025 12:22:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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