Franzi Thiele Poet Ballad

Disappointment

Diappointment

thank you rain – for raining now
for big drops falling
for my feeling you show
the names my head is calling
the pictures it draw

thanks sky to be that grey
grey like my feeling
walking in an deserted bay
knowing, water brings healing
streams like a feeling - never stay!
In the sand i am kneeling
talking silently to the water: Hey!

thank you ocean
for being that deep
for surrounding me like a lotion
for sharing my grief
for freeing me from torture

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Beata Agustin April 5, 2025 at 12:22 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.