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Disappointed Children

ducks falling away the town's small lake is frozen kids left holding bread

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/7/2015 9:05:00 PM
I really like this.
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Date: 2/6/2015 1:09:00 PM
A real haiku with very nice images.
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Date: 2/6/2015 1:03:00 PM
Excellent haiku, Stephen. Well done!
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Date: 2/6/2015 8:13:00 AM
touching Haiku.. nice pen Stephen.. regards
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Date: 2/6/2015 3:42:00 AM
oh brilliant imagery Stephen - great haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx
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