Disappointed

Create dripping sprinkles rain toward earths dying crust, beauty shattered in a moment of time, 
everlasting tragedy in the creators mind, failed son's and daughter's unable to look in the eye all 
banished away paradises, to terrorized eye's
2/16/10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 9, 2010 at 12:03 AM
Good work!!!!!! I liked it!!! Vrushani!!!
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