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Disappearing Ink

A sky without birds ~ Is a poem without words 11/9/2019

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Michael Craig

Date: 12/16/2019 11:16:00 AM

You said something so deeply profound in few words, true poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2019 2:41:00 PM

so simple, yet SO AMAZING. FAVE

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/15/2019 8:53:00 PM

So simple I almost didn't post it ;), Thank you Andrea! xomo Hugs!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/1/2019 10:47:00 AM

A new fave, perfect.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/2/2019 7:30:00 AM

Thank you <3

John Gondolf

Date: 11/24/2019 11:44:00 AM

We must never let that happen, Mo, nicely written. Hugs, John

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/25/2019 7:21:00 AM

Amen, hoping and praying. Thank you John, xomo

Mike Bayles

Date: 11/22/2019 2:27:00 PM

I like this poem, and it truth, and the beauty of its simplicity

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/23/2019 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Mike, xomo

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/21/2019 8:38:00 PM

So true.Loved this one. SuZ

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/23/2019 3:28:00 PM

Thank you Suzanne :) xomo!

Indiana Shaw

Date: 11/20/2019 11:19:00 PM

Ouch . . . : (

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/21/2019 7:19:00 AM

...and we're out of bandaids x

P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/13/2019 5:59:00 AM

Perfect penning just perfect...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/13/2019 6:53:00 AM

This one just just tapped me on the nose ;), xomo <3

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/12/2019 1:16:00 AM

Sadly this could happen. I hope it never does though!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/12/2019 7:09:00 AM

You and me both ;) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2019 7:51:00 PM

Yup! You've nailed it, my friend! Bullseye, Maureen. Smiles, Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/11/2019 8:12:00 AM

Hugs, xomo!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/10/2019 8:07:00 AM

Loved this beauty, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:51:00 AM

Thank you Vijay xomo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/9/2019 9:12:00 PM

Lovely, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thank you Line xomo

Ann Foster

Date: 11/9/2019 9:06:00 PM

Wow. You never cease to hit home, every time. The score... out of the ball park... Cheering... Ann

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:49:00 AM

Thank you <3 <3 <3 Say hi to your chickens for me! I'm in the city, there's talk about legalizing chickens... I have two old doves, big fancy pigeons next. ;), xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/9/2019 9:01:00 PM

The blue slate awaits a “v” to form

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:45:00 AM

There's a few Canadian geese, too few. x

Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/9/2019 5:15:00 PM

Reading this is wonderful Maureen, but the meaning not so; it seems you are truly upset with what has happened with the birds. What exactly is happening in Canada with the birds???

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:43:00 AM

Thank you Jeff. Pesticides, loss of habitat, climate change, you name it. xomo

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2019 5:08:00 PM

nice one MoMo...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:41:00 AM

Thank you One, xomo <3