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A sky without birds ~ Is a poem without words 11/9/2019

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Date: 12/16/2019 11:16:00 AM
You said something so deeply profound in few words, true poetry.
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Date: 12/15/2019 2:41:00 PM
so simple, yet SO AMAZING. FAVE
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 12/15/2019 8:53:00 PM
So simple I almost didn't post it ;), Thank you Andrea! xomo Hugs!
Date: 12/1/2019 10:47:00 AM
A new fave, perfect.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 12/2/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thank you <3
Date: 11/24/2019 11:44:00 AM
We must never let that happen, Mo, nicely written. Hugs, John
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/25/2019 7:21:00 AM
Amen, hoping and praying. Thank you John, xomo
Date: 11/22/2019 2:27:00 PM
I like this poem, and it truth, and the beauty of its simplicity
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/23/2019 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Mike, xomo
Date: 11/21/2019 8:38:00 PM
So true.Loved this one. SuZ
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/23/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne :) xomo!
Date: 11/20/2019 11:19:00 PM
Ouch . . . : (
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/21/2019 7:19:00 AM
...and we're out of bandaids x
Date: 11/13/2019 5:59:00 AM
Perfect penning just perfect...
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/13/2019 6:53:00 AM
This one just just tapped me on the nose ;), xomo <3
Date: 11/12/2019 1:16:00 AM
Sadly this could happen. I hope it never does though!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/12/2019 7:09:00 AM
You and me both ;) xomo!
Date: 11/10/2019 7:51:00 PM
Yup! You've nailed it, my friend! Bullseye, Maureen. Smiles, Gershon
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/11/2019 8:12:00 AM
Hugs, xomo!
Date: 11/10/2019 8:07:00 AM
Loved this beauty, Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Vijay xomo!
Date: 11/9/2019 9:12:00 PM
Lovely, Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Line xomo
Date: 11/9/2019 9:06:00 PM
Wow. You never cease to hit home, every time. The score... out of the ball park... Cheering... Ann
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:49:00 AM
Thank you <3 <3 <3 Say hi to your chickens for me! I'm in the city, there's talk about legalizing chickens... I have two old doves, big fancy pigeons next. ;), xomo
Date: 11/9/2019 9:01:00 PM
The blue slate awaits a “v” to form
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:45:00 AM
There's a few Canadian geese, too few. x
Date: 11/9/2019 5:15:00 PM
Reading this is wonderful Maureen, but the meaning not so; it seems you are truly upset with what has happened with the birds. What exactly is happening in Canada with the birds???
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Jeff. Pesticides, loss of habitat, climate change, you name it. xomo
Date: 11/9/2019 5:08:00 PM
nice one MoMo...
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 11/10/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thank you One, xomo <3