Disappearing Ink

A sky without birds ~
                                Is a poem without words










11/9/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Craig Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 11:16 AM
You said something so deeply profound in few words, true poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 2:41 PM
so simple, yet SO AMAZING. FAVE
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:53 PM
So simple I almost didn't post it ;), Thank you Andrea! xomo Hugs!
Kiser Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:47 AM
A new fave, perfect.
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December 2, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you <3
Gondolf Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 11:44 AM
We must never let that happen, Mo, nicely written. Hugs, John
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Amen, hoping and praying. Thank you John, xomo
Bayles Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 2:27 PM
I like this poem, and it truth, and the beauty of its simplicity
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Thank you Mike, xomo
Delaney Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:38 PM
So true.Loved this one. SuZ
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November 23, 2019 at 3:28 PM
Thank you Suzanne :) xomo!
Shaw Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 11:19 PM
Ouch . . . : (
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 7:19 AM
...and we're out of bandaids x
Awtry Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 5:59 AM
Perfect penning just perfect...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 6:53 AM
This one just just tapped me on the nose ;), xomo <3
Krutsinger Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 1:16 AM
Sadly this could happen. I hope it never does though!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:09 AM
You and me both ;) xomo!
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Yup! You've nailed it, my friend! Bullseye, Maureen. Smiles, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 8:12 AM
Hugs, xomo!
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Loved this beauty, Maureen.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Thank you Vijay xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 9:12 PM
Lovely, Maureen.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Thank you Line xomo
Foster Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Wow. You never cease to hit home, every time. The score... out of the ball park... Cheering... Ann
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Thank you <3 <3 <3 Say hi to your chickens for me! I'm in the city, there's talk about legalizing chickens... I have two old doves, big fancy pigeons next. ;), xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 9:01 PM
The blue slate awaits a “v” to form
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 9:45 AM
There's a few Canadian geese, too few. x
Connelly Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Reading this is wonderful Maureen, but the meaning not so; it seems you are truly upset with what has happened with the birds. What exactly is happening in Canada with the birds???
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Thank you Jeff. Pesticides, loss of habitat, climate change, you name it. xomo
One Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 5:08 PM
nice one MoMo...
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November 10, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Thank you One, xomo <3
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