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Disappeared Into Thin Air

C-old chill January twelfth H-as faded into the night; R-aindrop of the evening I-s nowhere in S-ight. A-n early morn has broken, S-unrise warms the weather; A-nother darkness has just D-isappeared into thin A-ir.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/16/2018 11:42:00 PM
Very clever piece containing a simple truth. Light over darkness! Hope your week is going well. Best regards from David in NZ
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 1/16/2018 11:50:00 PM
Thanks, David... such comment is truly overwhelming...

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