Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Haiku

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Disappearance

i fell out of bed
into rosy dawn sunshine
gerber daisy world

birdsongs in my ears
i had woken up dreaming
on summertime street

from the house i walked
into deep color and sound
nowhere to be found

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Kim Rodrigues December 15, 2020 at 4:07 AM Beautiful imagery! You are a joy to read, my friend! Evelyn Judy Buehler December 15, 2020 at 11:00 AM Very glad you enjoyed it. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar December 14, 2020 at 2:45 AM Funny how I too woke up in the middle of the night and had to spend some time on my computer. Then I went back to sleep and overslept. Lovely poem. ~~ Evelyn Judy Buehler December 14, 2020 at 10:29 AM Well, the computer is way more interesting than counting sheep. Thank you for the compliment. :)

Gershon Wolf December 13, 2020 at 9:14 PM Love that phrase 'on summertime street.' Sweet! Summer Splendor, Gershon Evelyn Judy Buehler December 14, 2020 at 10:25 AM I love writing haikus. Thanks for your appreciation. Sunshine Sensations, Evelyn

Alexis Y. December 13, 2020 at 6:53 PM Hi Evelyn, The paintings and the instrumental is just lovely. Nice imagery as usual. To step outside with beautiful colors with no sound would be something, wouldn't it? Good haikus. Have a great evening:-) Alexis Evelyn Judy Buehler December 13, 2020 at 7:58 PM Hi Alexis, I do always tend to write about scenes that I wouldn't mind entering. Your comments always bring a smile. Thank you for your kind words. Have a nice evening, as well. :=) Evelyn