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i fell out of bed into rosy dawn sunshine gerber daisy world birdsongs in my ears i had woken up dreaming on summertime street from the house i walked into deep color and sound nowhere to be found

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/15/2020 4:07:00 AM

Beautiful imagery! You are a joy to read, my friend!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/15/2020 11:00:00 AM

Very glad you enjoyed it. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/14/2020 2:45:00 AM

Funny how I too woke up in the middle of the night and had to spend some time on my computer. Then I went back to sleep and overslept. Lovely poem. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2020 10:29:00 AM

Well, the computer is way more interesting than counting sheep. Thank you for the compliment. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/13/2020 9:14:00 PM

Love that phrase 'on summertime street.' Sweet! Summer Splendor, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2020 10:25:00 AM

I love writing haikus. Thanks for your appreciation. Sunshine Sensations, Evelyn

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/13/2020 6:53:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, The paintings and the instrumental is just lovely. Nice imagery as usual. To step outside with beautiful colors with no sound would be something, wouldn't it? Good haikus. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/13/2020 7:58:00 PM

Hi Alexis, I do always tend to write about scenes that I wouldn't mind entering. Your comments always bring a smile. Thank you for your kind words. Have a nice evening, as well. :=) Evelyn