Dis Ease

DIS EASE

Sore tooth
In truth.

Must try.
No cry.

Brush not.
Teeth rot.

Too tired.
Teeth wired.

Mum! Mum!
Please come.

26/10/2017

bodypainsickfootle

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Andrea Dietrich

October 30, 2016 at 5:07 PM

ahhh sounds like a child with bad teeth! A good precautionary footle tale, Jean.

Jean Murray

October 30, 2016 at 5:24 PM

Hi Andrea. Thank you for stopping by.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2016 at 1:36 PM

- ..... :))) ...hilarious Jean :))) - Congrats on your great first place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

October 30, 2016 at 2:28 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Jan Allison

October 30, 2016 at 1:19 PM

Many congrats on your win Jean I loved this one and the pic that went with it was great:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

October 30, 2016 at 2:26 PM

Thank you for the callenge Jan.

Lim'Rik Flats

October 30, 2016 at 10:56 AM

my best pal/root canal Fun footlery Jean!

Jean Murray

October 30, 2016 at 2:25 PM

'Twas just some Tom Foolery.

Connie Marcum Wong

October 27, 2016 at 12:05 AM

I commend you on your footless Jean. I can't seem to write even one. 7 ; )

Jean Murray

October 27, 2016 at 3:48 AM

That's so nice of you to say Connie. It took me a while to get started. It's hard to be bisyllabic, isn't it, when we are used to a larger flow.

Paloma P

October 26, 2016 at 3:23 PM

Footle in mouth dis ease. :)

Jean Murray

October 26, 2016 at 4:17 PM

LOL Paloma.

Daniel Turner

October 26, 2016 at 11:39 AM

Thanks for reminding me. I better go and get mine from the cup. I left them soaking. Lol

Jean Murray

October 26, 2016 at 11:49 AM

No need to get you wired up then Daniel.

Tim Smith

October 26, 2016 at 11:38 AM

I think i'll go brush : )

Jean Murray

October 26, 2016 at 11:48 AM

I can see your pearly whites from here Tim.

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