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Dirty Dreaming

I thought about you last night; I hope that you don’t mind; You showed up in my nighttime dream, One of those sexually explicit kind. You may not think of me like this, And to be quite honestly true, I am just a little bit surprised That my dream had featured you. I don’t mean to embarrass you, Or put you on the spot; I just thought I would mention that In my dream you were really hot. I hope that this admission Doesn’t ruin our friendship; I wonder if reciprocated, Would you dare to mention it? So with your permission, If I can influence my dreams, I’d like to allow my consciousness To continue with this theme.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/21/2011 1:35:00 PM
Really cool write and rhyme Joe... don't know if for the finish the dream contest but a wonderful write .. good luck if so...
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:58:00 PM
This ink is well written, love the flow and I really enjoyed reading...write on!
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:07:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Joe. Love, Carol
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