Dirt Roads

In the far distance, you can see dust cloud boil in the air
               You know it is someone on their way, seems like years before they arrive
                                  Like life, sometimes a slow and rough ride
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Delacroix Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 9:50 AM
Nice write, great imagery evoked through the lines, Danny. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Shahwan Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 7:26 AM
Good poem. Pls comment my poem-Unique visit...thankfully.
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:45 AM
Love the comparison in this one. Metaphor is great. Keep writing. Sara
Nutter Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:10 AM
Very true statement. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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