Direction

North, South, East, or West; to which shall it be?
Please tell me which way...to escape from me!




* Ninth place in Brian Strand's contest, "Double Take".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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June 17, 2012 at 8:51 AM
I'm a lover of short poetry. I've been writing epigrammatic poetry for the last eight months (mainly haikus.) Check my first post, here, please. I sent it yesterday!
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June 14, 2012 at 9:15 PM
DONNA, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD
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January 24, 2009 at 8:04 PM
Just wanted to drop in and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest to my other comment. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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January 9, 2009 at 8:31 AM
Great write, Donna. Congratulations on your well deserved Win in Brian's contest. Love, Nigel
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January 5, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on a win in Brian's Double Take contest!! Well done!~ Carrie
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January 5, 2009 at 7:53 AM
Congrats Donna &thank you for supporting my contests Rgds Brian
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January 5, 2009 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations Donna on your win in Brian's contest! Welll done! Love, Shar
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January 5, 2009 at 4:38 AM
Excellent! Very creative and boldly searching - love that! I know this poem in my heart and soul, been there, done that. love, Kristin
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December 31, 2008 at 2:14 PM
Wow, excellent write, Donna. I am a bit in awe of this form and haven't dared try it yet. You have done it brilliantly. Wishing you a Happy New Year and hoping that all your special dreams will come true in 2009! Love, Nigel
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December 31, 2008 at 11:55 AM
I think most will relate to this poem. Much said in just two lines. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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December 31, 2008 at 8:00 AM
This is a qucik rhyming verse, but one that makes the reader really think. Very well written. Michael
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