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Dinner In the Wind

The wind chimes ring to a summer’s breeze, With the fragrant smell of hot chicken baking Wafting around, setting hearts at ease— As wind chimes ring to a summer’s breeze —The rain falls gently on the growing trees. The old couple waits with bodies aching; Hearing wind chimes ringing to a summer’s breeze— With the fragrant smell of hot chicken baking

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Bukang Liwayway

Date: 7/4/2013 8:23:00 AM

perfect time to have a hearty Dinner..awesome poem friend J.R. Thanks for sharing and thanks for passing by..Have a nice day!!

Roger Hadden

Date: 7/2/2013 3:55:00 PM

An exceptional piece of poetry. Great read. Thanks for the good review of my writings. Roger Hadden.

Guy Moquet

Date: 7/1/2013 3:29:00 PM

Short and clear but very powerful. It's a nice image of summer that you bring forward.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/29/2013 3:52:00 PM

J.R, this is a perfect poem delighting all of the senses. Spectacular imagery. Great writing !

Ayesha Karim

Date: 6/27/2013 9:10:00 PM

I like baked chicken too girl friend but you repeat baked chicken like three times in the poem damn.

Jessica Renee Dawson
Date: 6/27/2013 11:06:00 PM

Hi Ayesha, Thank you for noticing the repeating lines, although this is the Triolet form and requires to be written with repeating lines. If you would like to learn more about the Triolet form just use the search on Poetry Soup.