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Dinner In the Wind

The wind chimes ring to a summer’s breeze, With the fragrant smell of hot chicken baking Wafting around, setting hearts at ease— As wind chimes ring to a summer’s breeze —The rain falls gently on the growing trees. The old couple waits with bodies aching; Hearing wind chimes ringing to a summer’s breeze— With the fragrant smell of hot chicken baking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/4/2013 8:23:00 AM
perfect time to have a hearty Dinner..awesome poem friend J.R. Thanks for sharing and thanks for passing by..Have a nice day!!
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Date: 7/2/2013 3:55:00 PM
An exceptional piece of poetry. Great read. Thanks for the good review of my writings. Roger Hadden.
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Date: 7/1/2013 3:29:00 PM
Short and clear but very powerful. It's a nice image of summer that you bring forward.
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Date: 6/29/2013 3:52:00 PM
J.R, this is a perfect poem delighting all of the senses. Spectacular imagery. Great writing !
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Date: 6/27/2013 9:10:00 PM
I like baked chicken too girl friend but you repeat baked chicken like three times in the poem damn.
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Jessica Renee Dawson
Date: 6/27/2013 11:06:00 PM
Hi Ayesha, Thank you for noticing the repeating lines, although this is the Triolet form and requires to be written with repeating lines. If you would like to learn more about the Triolet form just use the search on Poetry Soup.

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