Dinner In Mid Air

Hummingbird so slight.
Wings like fairies taking flight.
Eat to your delight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Special gifted words Marty so visual for the Haiku and photo in the contest... good luck..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Culverhouse Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 12:19 PM
great job on the picture--
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April 26, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Good luck in the contest. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 11:41 AM
This makes me smile, Marty !! Delightful poetry !! Good luck! :)
Murphy Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 11:36 AM
very nice good luck in tne contest have a great day faleshia
Segal Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Lovely Haiku, love Simone
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