Dinner

your face, a dish with soup
noodles instead wrinkles
senescence, a good taste
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 3:46 AM
Made me smile - personally I would classify it as a senyru rather than a haiku:-) Hugs Jan x
Moldovan Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 3:50 AM
thanks... really is more a senyru than a haiku
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