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Dined With Cal

Vanilla ice cream
Creamy butter on my bread
Calories pleasure

Sweet maple drippings
Creamy salty buttered toast
Add calories joy

Fluffy cream pancakes
Strawberry crimson fresh blend
Calories well tamed

Hot pineapple cakes 
Squeezed foamy apple cider
Calories for health?

Greasy cheese pasta
Sprinkled egg tumbled bagel
Calories full blast!

Egg pie, peach float tart
Brewed steamy milk chocolate
Calories heart melt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/27/2013 1:23:00 AM
Delicious! Could taste and enjoy it all! Well done
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Date: 12/25/2013 4:24:00 PM
Yummy. A very tasty. Well done. take care. Pete. poem
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Date: 10/26/2013 11:53:00 AM
Hi Wendy, mmmmmmmmm i'm loving the calories ... wow.. to them fluffy cakes... you amazed me with these watery mouth teasing haiku... how can i deny a calorie after reading these... luv..LINDA
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Wendy Meyer
Date: 11/3/2013 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Linda for stopping by and leaving a mmmmmmmeaningful comment...blessings of good health, joy, and love to you, my friend <3 ... always, wendy
Date: 10/11/2013 9:01:00 AM
Ah, the guilty pleasures indeed! I'll take it! nice to meet you & thank you for this yummy piece!
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Wendy Meyer
Date: 10/11/2013 9:20:00 AM
A yummy treat for such a delightful comment as yours..thank u Drake...
Date: 10/11/2013 8:44:00 AM
This is a creative and cute rhyme about lifes little pleasures that are good but in a bad way. nice job
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Wendy Meyer
Date: 11/16/2013 9:02:00 AM
from you, i mean :-)
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Wendy Meyer
Date: 10/11/2013 9:25:00 AM
Thank u Robin...they say little pleasures are sometimes disguised as guilty splendors...thanks for the pleasure of getting a deliciously nice comment from yours..

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