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I delight in your twaddle inside me, young girl. Restore the golden-pink gleam with a swirl. Memories of who've died or are close to dying. Delve deep, according to inner-child supplying. Taking apart each self that has been dark-dyed Then, closely dig up the shimmering past's side. Until we draw a kinder rainbow hue, we must wait. Vacant space below crops and owned bogs is fate. I witnessed my parents waiting at the school gate. I spy my father wandering the area near the grate. The stems of ivy felt alike wings around her neck. I can view my mother eschewed quickly to the deck. ignited by her tenderness and exuberance. Hijinks start here, unlucky protuberance. Her giggling sounds akin to the essence of life. Her grin, which is always braw, stops any strife.
Written: May 1st 2023

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Date: 5/2/2023 6:01:00 AM
So many glimpses of your inner thoughts --wonderfully reminiscing poem my friend.
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