:::::Dimensions of the Gods:::::

one space two possibilities three eventualities ~ henceforth

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Gary Radice

Date: 9/14/2021 2:23:00 AM

5 stars.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/14/2021 4:23:00 AM

Cheers Gary I'll take that!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/13/2021 12:55:00 PM

It's impressive, David, how you can convey the present, the future, space, life, and death in just a few syllables. Those are the most critical issues and concerns all this world and civilizations have been fighting over for millions of years.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/13/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Lasaad, I was trying to challenge myself to write a very fundamental monoku about everything, using the least amount of steps possible, the (dimensions of the gods) title is purely symbolic, as no human knows for certain how or why it all came about , cheers David

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/12/2021 9:45:00 PM

Oh wow, where do we go from here, David? Four another recipe?.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/13/2021 12:57:00 AM

Hello Harry more a play on words here, probably a bit vague for one line, this might clear up my intentions, One space = eternity Two possibilities = something/nothing Three eventualities = Time/ life/death, Henceforth is just a play on Four = going forward to who knows where, is anyone's guess, cheers David