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:::::Dimensions of the Gods:::::

one space two possibilities three eventualities ~ henceforth

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Gary Radice

September 14, 2021 at 2:23 AM

5 stars.

David Kavanagh

September 14, 2021 at 4:23 AM

Cheers Gary I'll take that!

Sotto Poet

September 13, 2021 at 12:55 PM

It's impressive, David, how you can convey the present, the future, space, life, and death in just a few syllables. Those are the most critical issues and concerns all this world and civilizations have been fighting over for millions of years.

David Kavanagh

September 13, 2021 at 1:15 PM

Thank you Lasaad, I was trying to challenge myself to write a very fundamental monoku about everything, using the least amount of steps possible, the (dimensions of the gods) title is purely symbolic, as no human knows for certain how or why it all came about , cheers David

Harry Horsman

September 12, 2021 at 9:45 PM

Oh wow, where do we go from here, David? Four another recipe?.

David Kavanagh

September 13, 2021 at 12:57 AM

Hello Harry more a play on words here, probably a bit vague for one line, this might clear up my intentions, One space = eternity Two possibilities = something/nothing Three eventualities = Time/ life/death, Henceforth is just a play on Four = going forward to who knows where, is anyone's guess, cheers David

:::::Dimensions of the Gods:::::

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