Chris Hagy Poet Rhyme

Dim Lit Night

Quiet is the Dim Lit Night
Tearing Eyes cannot find sight
The Quarrelling Mind gives up the fight
Nothing now to make it right

The road to Freedom long is paved
So much Heartache along the way
The Eyes into the Soul today
Are blind and numb and well Betrayed

Kind and Gentle the Soul longs to be
Yet hopelessly Mental seems it Destiny
Save this Pen it's Company
Through times of Pain and Agony

Quiet is the Dim Lit Night

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Skat A August 20, 2016 at 1:36 PM Dim lit night... Very good skat Chris Hagy August 21, 2016 at 1:39 PM Thanks so much for reading skat:)...sometimes good writes come from dim nights.

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2016 at 7:21 PM And let me say how much I like THIS little poem! Chris Hagy April 16, 2016 at 6:58 PM Thanks, it is certainly a mood poem...glad you liked it.

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2016 at 7:21 PM It's ok. you were not the first to say you liked the original version. So much for THAT exercise in rewriting poetry. haha. Chris Hagy April 16, 2016 at 6:59 PM Sometimes the first time's the charm!