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We all thought the fall would be more colorful, and perhaps it will, but one friend noticed the leaves already falling with no color change. Again, catching our attention.

DILUTED Autumn leaves tremble passion has waned sans color floods diluted fall 9/19/2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2017 9:38:00 PM

A great haiku Kim. Too much of a good thing is never good. Enjoyed! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2017 9:57:00 PM

Thanks, Susan!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2017 7:54:00 PM

Oh, Kim, this is great stuff. Yes, floods are ruining lots of things lately!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2017 7:56:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! For sure...crazy stuff going on!

Silent One

Date: 9/19/2017 4:30:00 PM

Rain always ruins everything... A great haiku..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2017 7:27:00 PM

Thanks so much, Silent! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/19/2017 1:24:00 PM

Very apt depiction of autumn leaves--well done Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2017 4:11:00 PM

Thank you Vijay!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2017 11:31:00 AM

Great little haiku Kim:-) I've only noticed the autumnal leaves falling, how strange the leaves are falling before their due time.:-( hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2017 11:32:00 AM

I like the way you worded that, Jan - before their due time. Wow! Like I've said before, in communion we make our little poems even better. Thanks for stopping in! Hugs KIM