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We all thought the fall would be more colorful, and perhaps it will, but one friend noticed the leaves already falling with no color change. Again, catching our attention.

Diluted

DILUTED Autumn leaves tremble passion has waned sans color floods diluted fall 9/19/2017
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Ashley Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 9:38 PM
A great haiku Kim. Too much of a good thing is never good. Enjoyed! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 9:57 PM
Thanks, Susan!
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:54 PM
Oh, Kim, this is great stuff. Yes, floods are ruining lots of things lately!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Thanks, Andrea! For sure...crazy stuff going on!
One Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Rain always ruins everything... A great haiku..
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Thanks so much, Silent! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 1:24 PM
Very apt depiction of autumn leaves--well done Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 4:11 PM
Thank you Vijay!
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Great little haiku Kim:-) I've only noticed the autumnal leaves falling, how strange the leaves are falling before their due time.:-( hugs jan xx
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September 19, 2017 at 11:32 AM
I like the way you worded that, Jan - before their due time. Wow! Like I've said before, in communion we make our little poems even better. Thanks for stopping in! Hugs KIM
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